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Chapter Two Excerpt

Posted 11-18-2008 at 11:54 AM by shunoshi
Updated 11-18-2008 at 09:56 PM by shunoshi
Another NaNoWriMo excerpt for you all to sink your teeth into. Hope you enjoy it. As always, comments are welcome.


I stood against the wall of a nondescript building staring patiently at the door to Williamson Tailoring across the road. Waiting for Jacob to emerge from the day’s work, I mentally checked the equipment I brought with me. I would have to follow Jacob to ensure that he would be making his occasional visit to the Boar’s Snout today. This would give me the...
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Chapter One Excerpt

Posted 11-15-2008 at 11:42 PM by shunoshi
Updated 11-17-2008 at 02:17 PM by shunoshi
Here's a small excerpt from my NaNoWriMo novel. Any and all comments are appreciated.


“Damn them!” Frederick exclaimed, exasperated, “They have no business taking you away.” He glared hard at the copper coin sitting on his bar top. I stayed silent, not wanting to invoke his wrath any further. By Frederick’s reaction alone I knew I was already the victor in this battle; no need to prod the freshly caged animal. “Gather your things and go,” he finished, his voice settling...
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Day 6: Anyone have a 1,000 words to spare?

Posted 11-06-2008 at 09:25 AM by shunoshi
Updated 11-13-2008 at 06:33 AM by shunoshi
Day 6 of the NaNoWriMo is upon us. I finished off chapter 1 this morning and am pleased with my progress. This chapter is a good size, coming in at about 5,700 words. My outline calls for 12-13 chapters, so my worries over falling short in the end are easing.

The worry that isn't going anywhere is time. I haven't been keeping up to my goal of 1,725 words per day (higher since I didn't write the first day). This is officially my day 5 and by the end of the day I "should"...
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Thoughts on Day 3

Posted 11-03-2008 at 11:25 AM by shunoshi
Updated 11-03-2008 at 12:21 PM by shunoshi
Well, today is day three of the NaNoWriMo. It's been a rough start. You don't really comprehend the magnitude of this project until you start it. I unfortunately didn't find myself with any time to write on the inaugural day, so I began behind schedule. After resetting my daily goals to account for 29 days instead of 30 (1725 words/day), I started work on the prologue Sunday morning.

I sat down for several hours before the Vikings game at noon and was only able to come up with...
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NaNoWriMo Prologue

Posted 11-03-2008 at 11:12 AM by shunoshi
Updated 11-03-2008 at 02:03 PM by shunoshi
This is the prologue for my NaNo novel. Hope you all like it.


My name is James Alexander. Mine has been a life of comfort. I hail from Dorchester where my father, Harold, owns the largest trading company in southern England. This wealth gave me the opportunity to pursue more fulfilling, albeit less affordable, occupations.

I am a budding chronicler and have recently taken residence in London. My father, bless him, acquired a position for me to record the...
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