Poetry critique?

[TurboKinny]

I have missed a couple of my workshopping classes (oops!) but I have to have my poetry critiqued and edited before I can turn it in. Anybody feel like being brutal and reading some poems about Ronald Reagan?

[Blue]

I know nothing about Ronald Reagan, but I did watch one of his films once. So I could potentially do it? As long as it doesn't rhyme. I'll bring my awesome English degree here that I don't use to the table :)

[nnanji]

I'm not really a writer, but I'm a brutal editor. If you want me to take a look at them, I will gladly do so.

[Rogue_hunter]

You know, it would have been easier if you just posted the whole thing, either in this thread, or in your blog.

[KingGorilla]

You know, it would have been easier if you just posted the whole thing, either in this thread, or in your blog.

And the scathing remarks begin.

[OldeWolf]

Hard to say anything when there is nothing to say about yet.

I'm a poet so I can be brutal yet constructive if you want.

[TurboKinny]

Awesome, guys! I'll be posting them in my blog when I get the chance :)

[TurboKinny]

Alright guys, I finally got some up in my blog. I would appreciate anything yall can throw at me as far as suggestions, criticisms, or critiques! :)